That's a really amazing picture. I love nearly everything !

I love the way you drew that girl. Her face is so beautiful. Especially her eyes look very cool and real (I'm a huge fan of unrealistic eye colours) . The dress is so amazing.. I can't find the right word to describe it .

But there are some things I don't like so much (but they look great anyway):
I think her pose looks a bit stiff and the water surface seems to be unfinished (the rest of the background looks so awesome, so the surface looks a bit strange).

I really want your drawing skills ^_^
It was my first critique btw...
(Sorry for my english ...)